After we had shown our first draft to the rest of the class, some of the feedback was
- The relationship between the two boys is confusing
- It is unclear who is drugging who
- So far Annabelle doesn't have much of a motive to killing Brad
- It needs to build more tension and have quicker shots
- Include Titles and Credits
- Change the order of the shots so that it becomes more clear when Annabelle turns evil
- Make relationship between Annabelle and Caleb clearer to the audience
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